Thursday, April 18, 2013


Published in KernalsOnline.com
April 17, 2013, Editor's Choice
http://www.kernelsonline.com/EC-TANKApage.html


I spring forth
from the ecstasy of being
a lotus . . .
become legend as you hide
in the bosom of another



For this Editor's Choice, I've selected a tanka by Sergio Ortiz of Puerto Rico which is one that also includes elements familiar in old court poetry: association by nature, juxtaposition, meeting, parting, longing and the beauty of thought. It contains self but only in comparison to a lotus in the way perhaps that an old or past love has moved on to another's embrace by choice, or maybe even returned to because of obligation. Either way, the poet/lover has become legend now and what springs forth for readers, is the ecstasy of once being.

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