tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19731550.post9048340849144897167..comments2023-11-20T23:17:07.204-04:00Comments on Adobo Criollo Sergio Antonio Ortiz Rivera : NaPoWriMo Saturday, April 11, 2010Sergio A. Ortiz Riverahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16555859058332499475noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19731550.post-87506421623071625112010-04-11T13:19:51.772-03:002010-04-11T13:19:51.772-03:00Thank you OP, I have done some editing.Thank you OP, I have done some editing.Sergio A. Ortiz Riverahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16555859058332499475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19731550.post-73460161939881028812010-04-11T12:43:34.799-03:002010-04-11T12:43:34.799-03:00Sergio,
Every line works seamless with the next. ...Sergio,<br /><br />Every line works seamless with the next. This poem is wickedly biting and funny; and in the end, startling...as if a bird realizes it has just been caught by the neighborhood cat. Thank you.....pajamasold pajamashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10229885785933385293noreply@blogger.com