Never use the word "suddenly" to create tension

Never use the word "suddenly" to create tension




I placed chains made out of dawns 
on our nuptial thalamus.  
Why did you abandon me?  


I Entangled your steps 
with all my furrows.  
Why become the decoy of the time?  


Suddenly, day and night
abandoned me.  What did you leave, 
but a tightly suffocated shadow!

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