Haiku

silent tears . . . 
mother's gravestone 
buried in moss



or


mother's gravestone 
buried in moss- 
Buddhist prayers 

Comments

  1. I prefer the first - it's sorrowful and has a strong image that pulls me.

    Cate

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  2. thank you Cate. You've made up my mind.

    Sergio

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