Sunday, April 11, 2010

NaPoWriMo Saturday, April 11, 2010



We Walk the Plank with Strangers

Dear friends.


this poem was taken down because it will be published in the next few days at Scythe

















© Sergio A. Ortiz, April 10th, 2010




2 comments:

  1. Sergio,

    Every line works seamless with the next. This poem is wickedly biting and funny; and in the end, startling...as if a bird realizes it has just been caught by the neighborhood cat. Thank you.....pajamas

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  2. Thank you OP, I have done some editing.

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