NaPoWriMo Saturday, April 11, 2010



We Walk the Plank with Strangers

Dear friends.


this poem was taken down because it will be published in the next few days at Scythe

















© Sergio A. Ortiz, April 10th, 2010




Comments

  1. Sergio,

    Every line works seamless with the next. This poem is wickedly biting and funny; and in the end, startling...as if a bird realizes it has just been caught by the neighborhood cat. Thank you.....pajamas

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  2. Thank you OP, I have done some editing.

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